Sample output — This profile rewrite was produced by the LinkedIn Profile Optimizer skill. The full methodology lives inside the paid skill.
Sample Output · Fictional Candidate

A LinkedIn profile,
rewritten before → after.

Daniel Reyes · Senior Product Designer · same person, same career. On the left: what recruiters scroll past. On the right: what makes them send a message.

220
headline characters, used with intent
8
surgical changes, numbered below
6s
the recruiter's first impression
BEFOREThe profile recruiters scroll past
DR
Daniel Reyes
Senior Product Designer at Northwind
San Francisco Bay Area · 500+ connections

About

I am a hard-working and dedicated product designer with a passion for creating user-friendly digital products. I enjoy collaborating with cross-functional teams to deliver great experiences for our users.

Experience

Senior Product Designer
Northwind · 2019 – Present
  • Responsible for the mobile app redesign project.
  • Worked with engineers and product managers on new features.
  • Helped improve the design system.
  • Participated in user research sessions.

Skills

FigmaPhotoshop SketchTeamwork CommunicationDesign
AFTERThe profile that earns replies
DR
Daniel Reyes
Senior Product Designer | Design Systems & Mobile UX | Products used by 2M+ people
San Francisco, California · Open to remote & NYC roles
12

About

I design products people open every day. My last two apps reached 2M+ users with a 4.8-star average rating.

I'm a Senior Product Designer specializing in design systems and mobile UX. At Northwind I built a token architecture serving 6 product teams and cut design-to-dev handoff time by 40%. Before that, I led an onboarding redesign that lifted activation 22% in one quarter.

My sweet spot: turning fast-moving product teams into design-system believers — governance people actually follow.

Currently exploring Senior / Lead Product Designer roles — remote or NYC-based. Message me here; I reply within a day.

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Experience

Senior Product Designer
Northwind · 2019 – Present
  • Rebuilt the onboarding flow for a 400K-MAU app → activation +22% in one quarter
  • Built a token-based design system serving 6 product teams; cut design-to-dev handoff 40%
  • Ran 38 usability sessions in 3 months; killed 2 features pre-launch, saving ~6 eng-weeks
Product Designer
Meridian Payments · 2016 – 2019
  • Shipped 4 major releases as design lead of a 5-person squad — zero missed dates
  • Lifted checkout completion 18% with a two-step payment redesign
4

Skills

Product DesignDesign Systems Mobile UXFigma PrototypingDesign Tokens Usability TestingInteraction Design User ResearchProduct Analytics
5

Featured

Pinned post — “How we rebuilt Northwind's design tokens in 6 weeks” · 412 reactions · proof of how I think, not just what I claim.
The 8 changes

What changed, exactly.

Every numbered badge on the After profile maps to a change below. Same person, same career — different packaging.

1

Headline rewritten with the role-first formula

“Senior Product Designer at Northwind” → searchable market title + specialty + proof. The default headline wastes LinkedIn's highest-ROI line.

2

About opens with a result, not adjectives

“hard-working and dedicated… passion for…” → “My last two apps reached 2M+ users.” The first 300 characters sit above the fold — they must sell.

3

Duties became quantified wins

“Responsible for the redesign…” → verb + scope + measured outcome. Every role now carries at least one number a recruiter can trust.

4

Skills rebuilt around recruiter keywords

Generic “Teamwork / Communication” out; the top 3 now match the target role's hard skills. Same career, the vocabulary the algorithm searches for.

5

Featured proof, pinned

A real post with real detail shows how he thinks. Claims without evidence are just claims.

6

Explicit call to action

The About now ends with target roles, geography, and how to reach him. Recruiters never have to guess what to do next.

7

Availability signals fixed

Location, “open to” settings, and work-mode line corrected — filters hide wrongly-configured profiles from the searches that matter.

8

One consistent keyword language

“Design systems / mobile UX” repeats across headline, About, experience, and skills — coherent phrases beat scattered synonyms in search.

The buyer test

This page is the product: a complete before → after rewrite for a fictional candidate, with every change explained. The skill delivers this same transformation for your profile — audit, recruiter-brief, 3 headline candidates, a full About rewrite, quantified bullets, a keyword map, and a publish-day checklist.